today we gave our presentation

pitching our potential ideas, concepts, methodologies, collaborative framework and outcome.

Here's some of the feedback we got!

• focus on the methodology more, imagine it like a recipe and list concise tasks and activities you will complete
• think precisely about focusing on language, research into linguistics- the word 'love' and signs and signifiers
• look into artists historically who have worked together (yoko ono and john lennon perhaps?)
• think about to what extent love is a construct
• clearly define the audience's role within the performance- why are they there (consider voyeurism)
• think closely about the idea of the diaries that are being kept, are the rules we have imposed restrictive- if they are, how does this help us explore the absurdity of defining love